What I fixed

I handed in my paper today. I made multiple changes to my paper. The changes that I made were a whole new introduction paragraph, refining verbs, correcting to MLA format, adding information about the film, as well as making my conclusion stronger. The peer evaluations seemed to help me a lot because we had more than thirty minutes to critique people on what they should fix and amend. I did enjoy this because it showed how much other students can help as well as Dr. Kyburz's notes. All in all, I believe my final draft was much improved from previous drafts. I did learn a lot from this assignment and will improve on future assignments.